ext_178973 ([identity profile] dreiser.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dreiser 2008-12-13 06:38 am (UTC)

I tried not to go overboard with the references to Bianca and her eyes but I'm glad I got the point across. I think a lot of their connection is more intuition and instinct than anything else. It can get repetitive to try and write the unspoken bonding at times.

Reese is tomboyish to me and that does come from her body language and how she presents herself physically but I think it's also in her personality. I think being vulnerable is a quality that's associated as more feminine and Reese, because of her parental issues, doesn't like to feel that way with most people. Bianca proving the exception.

Glad you're still liking the fic!

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