I love that Sofie is rooting for Bianca/Reese; it's adorable in a way. I love that she has Bianca's best interest at heart. :)
I'm enjoying this sync between the two of them, physically. You capture it very well; the dialogue, along with the physical coming together of the two of them is just beautifully, perfectly written. You write with such intrinsic detail, I really am blown away by it. I can really see what's playing out as I read and very few fan fic writers can capture moments like that.
"Is it true she scared away a grizzly bear by saying her name?"
*giggles* What a throwback! I still die of laughter watching that clip.
Oh, Bianca! How you'll never escape your mother's clutches!
it was as natural as when they had come together
That kiss was just... I swooned a little. Again, beautifully written, and I feel like a broken record saying it but it's so true. I'm so pulled in by this story, and you just keep reeling me in.
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I'm enjoying this sync between the two of them, physically. You capture it very well; the dialogue, along with the physical coming together of the two of them is just beautifully, perfectly written. You write with such intrinsic detail, I really am blown away by it. I can really see what's playing out as I read and very few fan fic writers can capture moments like that.
"Is it true she scared away a grizzly bear by saying her name?"
*giggles* What a throwback! I still die of laughter watching that clip.
Oh, Bianca! How you'll never escape your mother's clutches!
it was as natural as when they had come together
That kiss was just... I swooned a little. Again, beautifully written, and I feel like a broken record saying it but it's so true. I'm so pulled in by this story, and you just keep reeling me in.