All The White Horses: Part One (1/5)

[dreiser]

I dunno why anyone who reads this would not know of my website but just to be a fucking nerd because that's totally what I am I'm posting here to let those of you who read this piddling Livejournal and enjoy my L Word fanfics know that I have part one out of five for my S3 angsty Danish fanfic All The White Horses finished. Here is the link:

http://www.dreiser.net/lwordfic/whitehorses.htm

I'm weirdly iffy when it comes to my writing abilities in regards to angsty fanfics like this, although for some strange reason I enjoy writing them, so feedback is appreciated more than usual. Not that I'm going to stomp my feet and pout and scream that I won't write parts two through five if you don't give me feedback because I'm a nerd, not a fucking baby, and I already have the damn fic plotted out. I just would sort of like to hear how I'm doing since I remain stupidly nervous as to the writing quality of the story.

And thus ends this post.

Comments

[narcolepsy-slds.livejournal.com]

I was just interested in the medical side because it is my background and some people I know had breast cancer, I don't think it is important for the overall story.

It's great that you are writing this story because I am almost convinced that the story line in the show will be horrible. I don't like where IC is taking Alice in the preview (though LH was sooooo good in it, it was painful to watch), and I think she might "use" Dana's cancer to reconcile Danish. I am just not optimistic considering the jumps and loops of last season.

(frozen)

[dreiser.livejournal.com]

Let me know if anything seems inconsistent to you when it comes the medical side. I do have someone helping me but I like feedback on any level, you know? Especially about something serious like this. Sadly, it shows what I'm like as a person because thus far every woman in my family, father and mother's side, have died of some form of cancer. Breast, uteran, lung and do I know anything about the treatment? Nope. I blocked it out. But I sort of learned that from like... zoning out on my heart doctors. lol. It's really sad. I should pay attention but I don't.

Anyway! I don't have much faith in IC's storytelling for the upcoming season regarding Danish either. I also think that she's going to use Dana's illness to reconcile them as a couple and while I don't want Dana to die I have this sinking feeling she is. And if she does die, I want them to at least to be a couple when it happens. Simply because it would lend to some wonderful Alice character development in S4. I mean, if Dana dies there will be character development for Alice no matter what because of their relationship but it will be especially significant if they're back together.

Blerh. The only thing in S3 I'm looking forward to is Helacious friendship and Jenny's storyline with Max/Moira. Just because I love Jenny and Max/Moira promo cracked me up. Such twisted humor.